Kate and Dave - The turnaround

[LondonDave]

First story: any feedback welcome (and appreciated!)
Hope you enjoy,
Dave

[cobblers]

Absolutely right Morgana. Well written, simple story, easy to read, devoid of amateurish and OTT descriptive phraseology. I enjoyed reading it too. Is it partly autobiographical? And keep up the writing, Dave.

[Rattan]

Dave - another member of your fan club here.

Just a quick note to say that was a corker. Nice crisp sentences and no tired cliches. I really like the university scenario and have never got to grips with it in my own stories. Now back to your keyboard if you please - this deserves a sequel!

[Rattan]

:smokin

Mmmm - is that the sound of a gauntlet whistling through the air in my direction?

Point taken Morgana - time to stop hacking my way up and down the golf course and sto it down and tap out a few words. Might need some help with all this uploading business but something will be posted a bit later this week.

However, please don't be disappointed because I am not a Premier League author like Dave, your good self and the Prof.

[Rattan]

:hammer

Might also need some help with this spelling business as well.

Line 4 should read 'to stop' - what a long and boozy day it has been.